Analysis of student writing 2

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Dr Treves is doctor at the London Hospital. One day in 1884 Treves saw a picture in a shop near the hospital. And he meets Merrick. Merrick was very ugly. And he speaks at Joseph. The hospital doesnít help Merrick. And Dr.Treves went his hospital with Merrick. Time later the letter of invitation came at Merrick. Merrick was very happy. And Merrick met many people, but some people doesn't like Merrick particular. My opinion: Merrick was kindhearted. I think all people must donít distinction. [General analysis]