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Complex syntax

Nominalization

Suggest four instructions which the bank should give the customer concerning the safekeeping of the identification card.

Embedding

Explain clearly using at least three different reasons or drawing at least three diagrams why McClelland lost the battle.

Embedding (nested dependent clauses)

This is because although the shadow is not directly lit by the sun, it is lit indirectly by the blue sky above.

Embedding - Nominalization - Passive

Particular reference to the data files you have designed and the forms to be used to transfer data to the computer should be given.  

Heavy noun phrases - poor writing

"The combination of  ever more sophisticated public opinion sampling techniques and the increasing use of powerful computers to parse and subdivide the American people according to "psychographic" categories that identify their susceptibility to individually tailored appeals has further magnified the power of propagandistic electronic messaging that has created a harsh new reality for the functioning of our democracy."

"The combination of  ever more sophisticated public opinion sampling techniques and the increasing use of powerful computers to parse and subdivide the American people according to "psychographic" categories that identify their susceptibility to individually tailored appeals has further magnified the power of propagandistic electronic messaging that and has created a harsh new reality for the functioning of our democracy."

The Assault on Reason Al Gore, 2007